the Unfathomable

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

whisp and mist of fog

constant code of confusion

not seen through a rusty door

a dirty peephole or cracks in the wood

I'll never understand you

or why you did what you did

I guess I don't understand abuse

I guess I don't get hurting a child for fun.

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  • sorenbarrett

    Metaphors here as well as a direct hint at past pain still present. Sad and haunting

    • NinjaGirl

      thank you

    • Kez

      Wow, another amazing poem by one of my favorite poets. Great job NinjaGirl πŸ™‚

      • NinjaGirl

        thank you so much!

      • Thomas W Case

        Powerful and poignant.

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Nor should you understand it. I don't understand it either, my dear friend. All I can say is that your title says it all...it is truly unfathomable. β€οΈβ€πŸ©ΉπŸŒΉπŸ‘ Sending you lots of ninja hugs πŸ€—. Not even sure what a "ninja hug" is...but I am sending them! 🀣

        • NinjaGirl

          It doesn't matter what it is...it has the two best words in the English language!

          • NinjaGirl

            It doesn't matter what it is...it has the two best words in the English language!

            • NinjaGirl

              It doesn't matter what it is...it has the two best words in the English language!

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Indeed! I thought so too!

              • Cassie58

                Powerfully penned and poignant. Painful to think about and yet it happens all too often.

                • NinjaGirl

                  Yes, thank you so much for reading

                • NafisaSB

                  the pain echoes and stands out so well, that the reader cannot but fail to see the misery of the suffering person
                  hauntingly beautiful

                  • NinjaGirl

                    thank you

                    • NafisaSB

                      you are always welcome



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