The light from the sun marks a new day
Fighting the darkness of black and grey
The golden beams help us find our way
Lighting the sky with a refreshing ray
The light from the sun marks a new day
The golden beams help us find our way
The countryside is filled with piles of hay
The coast is has a boat dock and bay
The light from the sun marks a new day
Wishing the brightness in the sky could stay
And the clouds would clear and part away
The golden beams help us find our way
The children wake up and begin to play
Finding everything entertaining and okay
The light from the sun marks a new day
With the breeze the trees continue to sway
And the birds fly high and dance ballet
The light from the sun marks a new day
The golden beams help us find our way
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Author:
LP2187 (
Online) - Published: January 15th, 2025 03:47
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Comments2
Monorhyme in quatrains and I didn't bother to suss out the metre. Kinda a fun exercise, isn't it, though? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you very much, yes this was interesting to write!
I stand corrected: tercet stanzas. Thank you, Tristan! And keep having fun with poetry!
Love the monorhyme and how it is structured in tercets with a concluding quatrain. The flow of this is very musical, each line feels very connected to the previous. The message is wonderful as well...the darkness is present but even more so is the presence of light. Well done, my friend. Enjoyed this a lot. An easy fave. 🌹👏
Thank you so much, your interpretation is perfect, glad you liked it!
You're welcome, my friend!
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