forgotten soul

NinjaGirl

abandoned

lonely

hinting the signs

getting no response

masking gone away

grumpy face all the time

still nobody asked why

nobody asks what's wrong

not then, not now

I guess I'm just

a forgotten soul

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 16th, 2025 05:48
  • Comment from author about the poem: 5 hour energy is some pretty wild stuff, y'all. That has nothing to do with the poem, but I thought you should know XD
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Ignored possiblly but never forgotten. Good or bad our memories remain with all. A lovely write of abandonment that we all feel from time to time. Dark but most wonderful

    • NinjaGirl

      thank you!

    • Demar Desu

      5 hours of energy in a bottle that can fit in your palmโ€ฆ I wonder if we could create food that is as filling

      • NinjaGirl

        I'm sure its possible!

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        It is. In fact, I can't have it because of my body's newfound aversion to caffeine. Ah. Yay me! ๐Ÿคฃ Anyway, now for the poem. Wonderful job, my friend! I have felt this very way. Truthfully, I have been feeling this way a lot lately. People would rather remain ignorant of someone else's suffering rather than stand in the mud with someone who is going through the shit. It's not you, it is them. They are suppressing one of the best parts of humanity (empathy) to embrace one of the worst parts of it (apathy). For what it's worth, you're not forgotten by me or others on here! I am glad our paths have crossed, NinjaGirl! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

        • NinjaGirl

          if you absolutely do not want to sleep, I recommend it! ๐Ÿ˜€ thank you, and I'm also very grateful to have met you as well



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