Notice of absence from LP2187
will be gone for a week
will be gone for a week
Crying fills my ears
Anguish grabs a hold of me
I’m forever lost
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LP2187 (
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- Category: Haiku
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- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments3
I found your seryu incredibly powerful and poignant to how we all feel at some time,
Here is one for you inspired by yours, with a touch of hope. ❤️
Tears now fill my eyes
I'm lost but not forever
Anxiety fades.
Thank you so much for your comment, it means a lot to me. Your senryu made my day (even though my day's coming to an end)! Maybe I'll write a positive one next time. 😄
A strong senryu which delivers on its title. I like that Teddy has penned one for you that offers hope.
Thank you. Yes, Teddy wrote a great one, I also never knew what a senryu was, I thought I wrote a haiku! My mistake.
A wonderful senryu, my friend. Sadly, I know this feeling all too well! Well done. 🌹👏
Thank you very much, yes I know the feeling too!
You’re welcome! ❤️🩹
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