bad dreams

Demar Desu

they show me the man 

I do not want to become 

I must do better 

  • Author: Demar Desu (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 20th, 2025 00:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just had a nightmare
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 17
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something novel. Very nicely done

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Wow! What a way to interpret a dream...toward self-improvement! Must've been a hell of a dream. Rock on, bro! Well done! 🌹👏

  • Tony36

    WOW



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