it’s suppose to work
at least that’s what it feels like
pain… when it doesn’t
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Comments3
A mind teaser this haiku or maybe senryu makes one think
Another dynamite, relatable senryu, my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
Excellent write
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