What if it all is just a big lie?
If there is nothing after you die?
If existence has no purpose?
If Death plays with us in its circus?
If this entire life was useless?
If there is no sense of my muse mess?
Don’t know, if I should live or expire,
Give me rest, it’s my desire.
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Author:
𓆩Mase𓆪 (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: January 21st, 2025 15:48
- Category: Short story
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God is real or how were we created,and if God is real,i have the common sense to belive heavan is real.
good poem
-rengoku
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If it’s a lie than we lived well aiming for the best ideals, but if it were real then we’ve opted out by not believing and aiming for the opposite. No simpler logic than that it would seem. But that’s just another person’s thought. We decide for ourselves in the end! Massive write Mase, superbly engaging 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
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We all have our moments of doubt, fear, and wonder… but not one tear goes unnoticed, not one heartache will be forgotten. Victory comes dear warrior by simply choosing to get up one more time than you fall down. Proverbs 24:16
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Nice poem!!!!!
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Np
Yp
Np...
if it has no purpose, at least have fun with it
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A interesting and thought provoking read, nicely written
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You are very welcome
I've had several near death experiences. I'll tell you about them someday.
Thats scary.. Thanks for the comment Chad. 🙂
A powerful and haunting expression of the human struggle to find meaning in life. Well written!
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