The beach is my favorite place to be all my troubles melt away when I’m by the sea I love to feel the cool sea breeze blow through my hair and to walk barefoot along the sand without care when I sit and listen to the waves crash into the shore I dream of staying here forever the beach is my favorite place to be all my troubles melt away I love to feel the warm sand between my toes and the smell of salty sea breeze on my nose the energy running through me when I’m by the sea fills me with happiness and positivity the beach is my favorite place to be all my troubles melt away I love the beach at any time of the year in winter or summer I will still be here it is the place to let my soul free the beach is the place I want to be
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Author:
Avi (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 22nd, 2025 19:06
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Comments1
All the words and feelings are there;
even an effective natural use of repeating lines.
Now to let the lines “sit on the page”
making the look more like a poem (lines and stanzas)
or oddly shaped paragraphs, even.
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