The rustle of the leaves
The gently swaying palm
The slow refreshing breeze
That acts like a balm
The twittering of the birds
The silently grazing herds
The mist that hides the beauty
The guard who’s going off-duty
The call of the cuckoo
The screech of the peacock
Will herald the dawn
And your senses fully block..
All these sights will meet your eyes
If you go for a walk, around sunrise
So wake up, smile, and greet the day
Nature will, many dividends, pay
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The best time of day when nature is arising and you can clear your head, enjoyed the read.
yes it is one of the best times of the day - so tranquil and peaceful
A very nice rhyme of nature at the break of day. Lovely
thanks for stopping by - appreciate your feedback..God bless
I’ve only ever had a dawn walk a few times each year, and they all have been wonderful. This poem is relatable and resonant!
morning walks are always refreshing - hope you keep enjoying them
thanks a ton for the feedback
Excellent write
thank you so much
have a wonderful productive weekend
You're welcome, have a great weekend
Wow such a wonderful poem pleases the poetic senses in lovely rhyming.
Kudos for this nature muse!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
thank you so much for the wonderful feedback - it made my day ... yes, i will definitely go through your poems as soon as i find time. God bless you and give more power to your pen
Sunrise, the start of a new day. A clean sheet. A wonderful way to get the morning going. A walk in the natural environment, taking in all the gifts we are blessed with. And some miss out because they can’t be bothered. Uplifting and beautiful Safina. Hope you are well dear poet.
so nice to hear from your end - we are doing good. mornings are always bright, and the cheer stays through the day, when the beginning is good..so we need to keep our eyes, ears and hearts open to let the sunlight in
wishing you good luck, good cheer all through the coming year...
A beautiful poem
eye pleasing imagery!! 🤩
Terrific rhyme, rhythm
and flow, penned superbly!!🏆
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗 🌺 Thad
wow, thanks for the beautiful verse in reciprocation
best wishes to you too for more and more productive creative offerings
Quite possibly my most favourite time of day .. and my word, you have more than done justice to it .. much more .. Neville
thank you so much - glad it resonated with you
yes the quiet and peaceful serenity does soothe and make one calm too
all the best for more from your end.
How truly stunning I was there I was loving all the imagery and I felt very happy. 🌹
glad you liked it - nature is indeed lovely most of the time, especially when it is calm at dawn -
have a beautiful day
Beautiful. I love nature.
thank you so much
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