belle
she fell
elle
repellent
pour tous
beaucoup
ont laissé
because
herself
selfish
don't oublie
that it
n'était
pas la
choice
d'elle.
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Author:
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Very interesting a blend of French and English leaving me halfout or at least a quarter out in that I don't speak French but do understand some latin based words. Very unique and a fun read like a puzzle to think about. Liked the form as well
Haha! thank you!
Well, this was a fun mix of French and English. I really love how it bounces back and forth between the languages giving it a really unique vibe. As I read it, it is about this “belle” (beautiful) woman who’s going through shitty times, how people have abandoned her because of what appears to be selfishness, but then the poignant reminder that it was not her choice to be that way, calling the reader to have empathy and understanding. Nice write! Really loved this, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
That's exactly it! Thank you!
Yay! You are welcome! 🙏❤️
An intriguing poem, wish I still learnt French. Enjoyed the read!
haha! Thank you!
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