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NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

belle
she fell
elle
repellent
pour tous
beaucoup
ont laissé
because
herself
selfish
don't oublie
that it
n'était
pas la
choice
d'elle.

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 25th, 2025 17:52
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 20
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Very interesting a blend of French and English leaving me halfout or at least a quarter out in that I don't speak French but do understand some latin based words. Very unique and a fun read like a puzzle to think about. Liked the form as well

    • NinjaGirl

      Haha! thank you!

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Well, this was a fun mix of French and English. I really love how it bounces back and forth between the languages giving it a really unique vibe. As I read it, it is about this “belle” (beautiful) woman who’s going through shitty times, how people have abandoned her because of what appears to be selfishness, but then the poignant reminder that it was not her choice to be that way, calling the reader to have empathy and understanding. Nice write! Really loved this, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹👏



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