The Devil`s Kiss.
Watch out for the hand of love, it could be the devil’s kiss.
What you see before you may not be everything you wish.
Fooled by the way it makes you feel it's impossible to tell.
Is it as good as it seems or are you held firm under a spell.
Is the world of love and passion an honest positive reality.
Or something she carefully created, and it is all imaginary.
Do you feel that good or have you clearly misunderstood.
Is the love the tool to manipulate you, any way she could.
She found your weakness quickly and filled that tiny hole.
And in her best laid plans, you acquired the starring role.
She took you up to heaven then returned you back to hell.
You ended up drinking poison from the heart break well.
You were touched not by love but truly by the devil`s kiss.
And you never received anything you ever really wished.
Tobani.
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hope you all had a lovely weekend and have a great week to come.
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- Users favorite of this poem: Soman Ragavan, Tristan Robert Lange, Cassie58
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Comments9
It is said that the devil comes to us like an angel of light and thus this cautionary verse brings thoughts of vigilance and care. A good way to start the week. Thanks ever so kindly. 🙏🏻👍🕊️
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Yes, beware, the devil can have a smiling face...
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A look at the dark side of what we call love but I feel is more passion. So well worded and rhymed this one flows on seductively. Nicely done
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A very well constructed piece with an important message.It sounds like you are talking about my X.
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Thank you Tobani, on the well wishes. Right back at ya! This poem was an easy fave, my friend. It rang so well and, well, honestly I find this so very damn relatable in more ways than I'll go into here. Really, really loved this poem. 🌹🙏
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You're welcome, my friend! ❤️🙏
Powerful work.
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Powerful penning,
and warning too!
A sinSational write!!
Terrific rhyme and flow
way to go!! 🤩
Thank you for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
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So well composed Tobani. A poem with a message about a She Devil. I would imagine many a dumped bloke thinks he was dealing with one of those. Much enjoyed.
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It is an honour to be the 10th soul to hit the like button .. am sure, in time there shall be many more .. Reads like a bloomin bril sonnet if I'm not mistaken .. N
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