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Remember the pain
Of the millions who died
In shadows they lie
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Yep, they lie in shadows or Heaven
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And we must remember there loss always ( never forget the horror). Very poignant and sad piece.
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A most fitting senryu on today of all days. Never forget the unspeakable horror of the millions who perished. A most poignant piece LP2187.
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How beautiful and loving
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Wow! Indeed. This poem is so powerful because it is specific enough to gently guide the reader but broad enough that the "pain" could be anything. It is a wonderful poem that reminds us to look to the margins, to those suffering. The remembering is also, as I see it, a call to be proactive in the present with those currently lying in the shadows. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏
Thank you very much! I appreciate your feedback interpretation.
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