-$1.56 in my bank account

Demar Desu

last night on a date 

I tensed up when she ordered 

another drink…whew 

  • Author: Demar Desu (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 28th, 2025 11:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: dating is expensive
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    You got that nothing worse than a date ordering what you can't afford. On the other hand it is very rude to order what is not offered. Ialways order the least expensive thing on the menue if someone else is buying. Same with drinks. A fun read

  • Tony36

    Great write

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Understood. Say no more! 🤣 Well done, bro! 🤘😎



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