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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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Comments6
A great picture running in a stream from the roof to the gutter free. Ithought that you had gone back to that time when there were no spaces between words and no punctuation. That made things as hard to read as the rain itself. I was going to do this to this review as a puddle but thought better of it. Very createive.
haha, thank you!
Such an impactful poem, I like the layout, thanks for sharing.
thanks for reading!
Great write
thanks!
You're welcome
Amazin'
thank you!
Love this vertical poem that has you reading what feels like the rain falling. Well done, and very relatable.
thanks!
You are welcome!
Very cleverly done, feel it raining as you read down, enjoyed the read
thanks
You are very welcome
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