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NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

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  • sorenbarrett

    A great picture running in a stream from the roof to the gutter free. Ithought that you had gone back to that time when there were no spaces between words and no punctuation. That made things as hard to read as the rain itself. I was going to do this to this review as a puddle but thought better of it. Very createive.

    • NinjaGirl

      haha, thank you!

    • Tony36

      Great write

      • NinjaGirl

        thanks!

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Kez

          Amazin'

          • NinjaGirl

            thank you!

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Love this vertical poem that has you reading what feels like the rain falling. Well done, and very relatable.

          • Poetic Licence

            Very cleverly done, feel it raining as you read down, enjoyed the read



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