world is not perfect

Demar Desu

there are gatekeepers 

gates that need some type of lock 

and the ticketed 

  • Author: Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 2nd, 2025 14:01
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 15
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Indeed there are and don't forget the patrons who paid to get in. A wonderful senryu

  • sorenbarrett

    Indeed there are and don't forget the patrons who paid to get in. A wonderful senryu

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Truth! Now, how do I get in? 🤣 Well done bro!

  • DaBestPoemer

    your realy goooooooood poemer



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