As Riordan heads home from his first day at work; he wonders if he was too harsh. Or if Riosin’s feelings he hurt. Feelings don’t matter where business is concerned. A very hard lesson he himself had to learn. Facts are facts. And where linens and things are concerned, Riosin can lose it if she doesn’t allow Riordan to get her back on track. Riosin is all kinds of beautiful and this can cause a distraction. No wonder he was harsh with her; the work place is no place for attraction. Riosin is smart and Riordan can seem to understand; how she can allow her company to foolishly get out hand. Riosin is home and firing Riordan definitely comes to mind. However, she hired him to do a job and do it thoroughly; she just didn’t think many faults he’d find. He’s arrogant and rude and he gets under her skin. Never mind the fact that he knows how to lead and is quite handsome. But she deserves to be treated with respect. He was out of line in his treatment of her; this may be her worst mistake yet. So much is going on in the minds of these two characters of mine; I hope you’ll tune in again next time!
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GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ (
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Upon reading your story poems in the beginning in my blindness I did not see the creativity you displayed. Now that I have awoken form my rigid views I see a wonderful work of art in this style. This one continues to pull the reader along with its internal rhyme and continued segments that draw the reader back to your next one. Very nicely done you have incoporated the art of poetry with the genious of a mini series.
I appreciate your kind words. Thank you for reading!
Excellent write
Thank you Tony
You're welcome
Than k you for todays instalment, enjoyed
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