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Your light has dazzled my eyes
Your burning auburn, a relief to my cries
Your passion eternal;
Your gaze, a knife to my heart
For all desires to fall apart
Your radiance, an immortal light
Your gleam, a solace for my lonely sight
Your omnipresence seems diurnal;
Your grace an unparalleled beauty
Your smile to this mortal world, a serenity
Your flooding beam enough to quench my thirst
Your luminance no less than your erst
Your shine as fresh as a vernal;
Your omnipotence my delight
For my ardour is still alight
Your song, a devotion for me
Your luminous glow, a glee
Your blink bright yet fraternal;
Your faith, a reason to my mind
Your splendor decent to cause every gale fall behind
Your magnificence enlivens the biome
Your wisdom yet an unturned tome
Your incandescence a fear to the infernal;
Your glory to always admire
Be it rain, or be it fire!
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Author:
Simurgh (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is an ode addressing to the god of sun--- Apollo. Odes are one of the best form of poetry. I was inspired to write this poem on a early morning, when the sun rises colouring the world.\r\nThe rhyming scheme of this poem is--- aabcc. It has five stanzas with five lines each.\r\nI hope you all will like this poem. Please like, comment and share.
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Comments5
A wonderful Ode to something i wish would return very quickly and get rid of this cold, really enjoyed the read
Thank you for reading and commenting my poem. I will write more odes in the coming days.
You are very welcome
A beautiful tribute to the source of life and energy on earth. These words show an adoration and acknowledgement of splendor. Lovely
Simurgh....i loved this poem..yes..the visible God is sun...
Thank you for reading my poem. Hope to write more poems like this in the coming days. I appreciate your friendship and support a lot!❤️
Thank you dear..
Welcome
Classical in form and topic it shines like Apollo himself. A most lovely write
Heartfelt thanks for reading my poem and commenting on it again. The beauty of ode is always enticing.
A classic form of the poetry from the past...
An excellent starting point to grace MPS with. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
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