With closed eyes

Freddi

With Closed Eyes
I feel the gentle breeze caressing my skin.
I listen to the birds’ song—a playful symphony.
I shudder as the warm sun embraces my cold body.
I inhale the scent of the lush greenery around me.

Then, as I open my eyes, I am met with the gray reality

  • Author: Freddi (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 5th, 2025 13:32
  • Category: Nature
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  • Cassie58

    My senses were stirred and then I opened my eyes. Nicely conveyed nature poetry.

  • Poetic Licence

    I like this, with eyes closed we can anything at all and all is beautiful, yet when we open them the reality is different, enjoyed the read.

  • Tony36

    Great write



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