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NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

sick of love

the shape

of us is so

wonderful

but also so

tragic

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 5th, 2025 18:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: I'm not into the love poem genre much, (maybe I haven't loved someone enough yet), but here's a go at it!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 22
  • Users favorite of this poem: Poetic Licence, Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    A poem enigmatic I love it. It is far different than most love poems and therefor most creative. As someone that has been there in all aspects I would say it contains wisdom beyound your years

    • NinjaGirl

      Thank you!

    • Poetic Licence

      A few words but they capture being in love right to the point, a different love poem but a very good one.

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Loved this love poem. I can relate. Well done, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

    • Tony36

      excellent write

      • NinjaGirl

        thank you!

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Mutley Ravishes

          That's the first "love" poem I've read in an age.
          Sick of love? Well, when I rely on someone else for "my" happiness/fulfilment then I'm asking to get sick! So I guess I should rely on Someone Else instead!
          Great write.

          • NinjaGirl

            haha thank you!



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