Sun Is Breaking Through.
You shone a little light where darkness had settled.
Handled with care a soul that was aged and brittle.
Injected energy and life back into old ageing bones.
Giving me a sense that at last I might finally belong.
Then gradually started to untangle my troubled mind.
Allowing me to slowly try to leave the sad past behind.
Ease away those nightmares and I could finally sleep.
The tender embrace gave me an inner calm and peace.
You banished doubts and replaced them all with hope.
You cut through the lifelong chains in one loving stroke.
You got a tired worn-out heart to beat a just little faster.
One by one on the sore wounds you put a loving plaster.
You consume my heart with all your constant positivity.
Embracing me and replacing all that long held negativity.
Slowly, patiently you put the broken pieces back together.
Watered and fed, brought back to life a sad dying flower.
The way your eyes look at me speaks a thousand words.
I walked upright and proudly now where I once feared.
Through your unconditional love and care I feel reborn.
I am sure a meaningful love relationship has just begun.
You found me in the dark where the sun used to shine.
Man, dead on his feet and had reached end of the line.
You allowed the sun to start slowly breaking through.
My new lease of want of life, I owe everything to you.
Nataiella (2012).
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 6th, 2025 03:48
- Category: Love
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- Users favorite of this poem: Cassie58, Cheeky Missy, GenXer Shamrocker ☘️, Simurgh
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Comments12
How comforting and assuring 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated
You are most welcome 🙏🏻🙏🏻🕊️
A beautiful tribute to gratitude and love nicely written with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done
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Nice One Tobani
Comforting And Soothing
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Love certainly is a powerful emotion.Excellent poem.Welll constructed and impactful
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Fine words of a life changed for the better. A poem of gratitude. Love can change everything. Beautifully composed poem Tobani, much enjoyed. Have a lovely day.
Thank you Cassie, very much appreciated, enjoy your day too.
Thank you 🙂
Beautiful work.
Thank you Thomas for your feedback, very much appreciated
Wow. For Valentines' month, this takes the cake with a delectable sweetness so savory one is tempted to faint on the spot. Charmingly rendered with superb imagery and an exquisitely haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
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My pleasure, truly. You're welcome.
A beautiful tribute to overcoming oneself. A beautiful write!
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Great write
Thank you Tony, much appreciated
You're welcome
May that sun always rise for you PL.
Andy
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Beautifully constructed work of a poem!
I enjoyed reading it significantly.
Brilliant work that needs more appreciation! 🤩🌹🌹🌹
A great tribute to love which can change the meaning of life in an instant! ❤️❤️💓💓
Hope to see more comments on your beautiful poem, Tobani... Wishing you a good day, ahead!😊
With love,
Simurgh
Your poetic friend!
Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated as always
You are most welcome, dear.
Enjoy your weekends!✍️💖🌹🌹
Watch the movies The Sherlock Holmes ----2009 and Game of the Shadows----2011 where Sherlock Holmes was played wonderfully and" Rock On! "🎧🎤❤️ by Robert Downey Jr. ( My favourite actor, RDJ ) and Irene Adler was played by Rachel McAdams, my favourite actress!! 🆒👗🌹🌹
Also, binge watch Walt Disney's Zorro acted by Guy Williams tomorrow!
Tobani, your poems are always beautiful! Continue writing and reading more poems in the coming days here in MPS.....
How many of you are Robert Downey Jr ( RDJ) fans here?🤩😍
He is great! Ain't it? Send your opinions here.
I loved how he acted in the Marvel Universe's Ironman, The Sherlock Holmes----2009 and The Game of Shadows in 2011!
RDJ playing in the boxing match as Sherlock Holmes and chasing Irene Adler in disguise to learn her motive was the most interesting scenes of the movie.....🆒💖😎😎
I loved how Rachel McAdams acted in the role of Irene Adler in this movie, falling in love with her acting skills once more!
She stunned everybody with her acting as Irene Adler and beautiful Victorian red bustle costume she wore in this movie... In my opinion she is the best Irene Adler ever!👗💌❤️❤️
Kindly, share your comments on this.
What do you think about the great actors, Antonio Banderas ( Spanish ) and Guy Williams ( who appeared as Don Diego de la Vega or his alter ego infamous Walt Disney's Zorro) ??💌💌
Let me know about your opinions, guys....
Anyways great write, Tobani! Hope to read more of your poems in the coming days...
With regards,
Your poetic friend,
Simurgh
India
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