I wouldn't have time to visit this vast universe
which fits in a galactic nest .
Roaming the dusty oceans of moonlight ,
the red windswept plains of mars
and saturn's rings that chill suffering souls ...
I wouldn't have time to go looking
for the taste of this burning solar honey ...
Flying beyond pluto ,
admirable and free photon
dancing in the light of a capricious galaxy
with the look of a newfound love ...
Drink from the icy fountain of imortality,
get in touch with the music of the spheres
this melody of stars and desasters ...
Sidereal voyager relieved of Prometheus' torment
At the orchard of gods ,biting the sacred fruit
without fear of malefice...
I'm this elegant proton ,
Inspired walker in the shape of emptiness
beyond the echo of so many silence ,
will I have time in this dimension
of a scattered deck of cards
where hours are but the children of chance ?
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Author:
lorenz (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 6th, 2025 09:56
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Comments5
This poem is filled with so many metaphors and solar images that intermingle in their meanings. A lovely write
a vast universe beyond the rabbit hole ...
This poem is like a journey beyond space and time, but it remains deeply human in its essence. The philosophical echoes are very strong.
Cosmic intoxication and metaphysical vertigo !
Great write
Thank you tony !
You're welcome
Great write.
Thank heavens this universe is too vast for folks in tourist mode to visit all of it!
Let's visit it in spirit mode !
For sure. That will definitely stop places from ever becoming overcrowded!
Not enough time, sure, but don't let that stop you from trying. We are part of the universe after all, eh? Good work here.
We're all made of star dust ..
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