I Vacationed in Heaven

RSM0812

 met an angel in the vastness, of eternal clouds of futures past,

His light shone down into my eyes, and suddenly 10 salty tears I whimpered and I cried.

I fell and sobbed and begged him for, to open his almighty door,

To lead me into grace and love, and every warm and good thing above.

And all that is what’s more.

He opened it and let me glance, upon his grand eternal plan.

Every soul was light like stars, and every soul in light danced so near yet so afar.

Making love below his stead, not a one knew that they were dead.

Instead it was more like life but better still, like vines and roses hung from a sparkling rain covered window sill.

And moonlight shined through crystal glass, of flat not broken, shard or cast.

It warmed the tips of angels wings, as flight took stead like angels sing.

So sweet so innocent for us to hear, their many voices in unison our ears to bear.

Upon my step I felt his love, his heart unlike any other kind,

My mind did picture truth in thought.

It took me by surprise, but scared I surely was not naught.

He let me in to mingle with, the other flowers in the mist.

And as I flew and circled high, I didn’t ask him where or why.

For his forgiveness I had sought, and from his judgment come, I must not have been caught.

Or maybe just his essence true, like love and life of all the few.

That led the ways for them all, in heavens golden realm befell.

The Minority of us who will be saved, will lead the future of man’s ways.

And remind each other where we’ve been, and what in heaven we have seen.

For purity and truth does take, the pretense of the realm he made.

For if to die and linger there, once again your flesh will care.

And ponder all the violent hate, upon the earth below the gate.

Our ways, once heaven tasted change, for the embitterment of the souls who stayed.

And gave to him a righteous prayer, deserved of for making us so rare.

That only we exist in all the universe so vast, of all the futures and every past.

For human natures given will, has finally proved the lord, so watchful and quiescently so still.

Forever in this realm we wait, to live again with a different fate.

And more will join the angels will and opened arms of saintly pull, until the day the wondrous tides of heaven and its souls are full.

 

 

  • Author: RSM (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 9th, 2025 04:18
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • arqios

    Working out the correlation of โ€œvacationโ€ in your two latest poems, an interesting journey of thought and feeling. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

    • RSM0812

      Thanks. I missed a few beats in the heaven write. After I published it I instantly wanted to change a few things. I like my rant on much better. Lol.

      • RSM0812

        • RSM0812

          I meant to say I like my rant on hell better

          • arqios

            Well you could post script on the authorโ€™s note section or put up an entirely new post ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

          • sorenbarrett

            This seems a continuation of The Divine Comedy and the upward climb into heaven. Nicely written with great imagery



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