nothing could halt me,
all were under my feet
in my dreams, i existed
via the echoes, i flew
everywhere i wanted
suddenly, youth ceased.
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Author:
Palm (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Sad
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Comments3
Great write
Thanks, Tony
You're welcome
A clever and enjoyable piece of writing.
There are poems that every once in a while jump out and grab you this is one. Short but with a surprising punch at the end. Love it definately a fave
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