Beach time.

ginny jayne

The waves lapping getting bigger as they move along,

Rolling across so intense and strong.

A surfer takes to the waves what an amazing sight,

He glides like a bird in flight.

The sea is so calm as the sun goes down,

It looks like it is wearing a crown.

As we walk along the beach hand in hand, 

We leave our footprints in the sand.

  • Author: Jelly baby (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 10th, 2025 15:59
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  • Poetic Licence

    A lovers walk looking out at the big wide world, enjoyed the read.

    • ginny jayne

      Thank you, there is something so serene about a walk on the beach.

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        Very nice with rhyme and an ending metaphor

      • Tony36

        Awesome

        • ginny jayne

          Thank you, pleased you enjoyed it

          • Tony36

            You're welcome



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