Just Shit

teardrop

My pen once again spill words

On an empty page

Lavishly exposing emotion

From the depths of my belly

Deep in my veins

An explosion of thoughts rush to

Escape me

Hurry my fingers

Keep up with the brain

Stop this fountain of madness

From closing

Don't read what you write

Don't write what you read

It will flow as intended to be

And when my pen stops

The tablet shall close

As a sigh of relief engulfs me

Ah, sleep surely will find peace

Tonight

For the bowels of the beast

Have been emptied

  • Author: teardrop (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 12th, 2025 00:55
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  • Poetic Licence

    I find that writing can have that effect, sadly sometimes it does not last long enough, hope you have a good day, well written piece

    • teardrop

      Thank you my friend for the read. You have a wonderful day as well!

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome

      • orchidee

        Me being daft -well, stand in the opposite direction if s...omething is hitting the fan! heehee.

        • teardrop

          Thank you for reading I really appreciate it.

        • David Wakeling

          Wow so much to unpack here.Some sadness some panic and some dependence on sleep.Better days ahead I hope

          • teardrop

            hi David, thank you a lot for the read.

          • sorenbarrett

            Good advice to the writter and well spoken in flowing poetic words. Nicely done

            • teardrop

              Thank you for the read and input, I really appreciate ut,

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Yes, writing is cathartic and can be a source of peace, even if only fleetingly so...which is why we keep writing, no? I very much relate to this. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏 Faved.

              • teardrop

                Good morning Tristan, Yes, writing is my stress relief and often if I don't quickly write the words, it becomes a poem never written. Again, thank you for reading me

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Always, my friend! Glad to! Enjoy your morning and day.

                • Mutley Ravishes

                  Great flow
                  I can only belly laugh
                  When I let go
                  So.....!

                  • teardrop

                    LOL...loved your reply. Thank you for reading me.

                  • Cassie58

                    Got to get those thoughts down and the mind cleared before we can contemplate sleep. That’s what the writer has to do. Empty the bowels of the mind. I like that. I just wish my muse would flood my mind with more inspiration. Enjoyed reading you teardrop.

                    • teardrop

                      Good morning Cassie, thank you for the read. Yes, a lot of times if I don't quickly write the words as they come to me, it becomes a poem never written. Hope you have a wonderful day,



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