When the Sun and the Moon
Will cross the line
I’m waiting for you,
My divine.
Just say goodbye to your problems
And look at the light.
Your pain was countless,
Come over to my sight.
Don’t think you are alone
And give your hand.
From now you belong
To the Land of Sand.
It will takes all weakness away
And brings you calm.
You will be alive again,
Look, do you see the sign?
The fluttering cosmic moth
In the cold moonlight
Keeps the key to the door that is closed
Don’t give up.
And then I will love you forever
In this Land of Sand.
And we can be always together
In our new homeland.
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Author:
Li Yanmey (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 12th, 2025 03:26
- Comment from author about the poem: There will be several stories about these characters, and this is the first one. I appreciate the one person who inspired me to write it.These poems will be posted under the hashtag #moonlight_stories
- Category: Love
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That was a very enjoyable read
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You are very welcome
Although it at first seemed a romantic poem between lovers it soon turned to me into a deeper meaning of death as a lover where one is taken home to one's origin in a land of sand. Sorry if this was not the intent but it was just too strong a metaphor to ignore.
Wow, I like this interpretation! I think poetry (and all art as such) is open to different meanings. I am glad that you saw something yours in this poem.
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