When I no longer have to face the eyes in my mind is the day I'm Finley fine no longer wanting to go back in time now wishing for my own demise no longer facing the thoughts or time no longer facing the eye in my mind
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That eye in the mind is judgmental, remorseful, full of regret, critical and freedom from it lets us live. A wonderful write
Constantly looking through our own eyes is a dangerous game, we usually only see the wrong, highlighted very well in this write
I really like this very nicely said!
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