Enough with the days
But never with the space
Stumbling thoughts stopping halfway
Never making it through the gate
Those who expect are always left in disdain
Trying to rub you off as they do to a stain
It's never beyond the layer
you shed, for them
Still tearing yourself apart,
even when they don't go beyond the hem?
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Thoughts and emotions never adequately expressed are always a problem. Misunderstanding and problems from things left unsaid. A deep poem that speaks.
Thanks for the read. I am glad that you picked it up well and expressed your viewpoint.
A poem that goes deep into the core of a relationship, and the communication and emotionally problems that can follow, well expressed.
Thanks for the read.
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