My artistic expression, Reveals my confession
I can't stop professing. In faith, I am obsessing
My message is pressing. To end your oppression.
Your souls are the question. With Hell, you can't be messing.
Take to heart this lesson. May God's love be your blessing
Eternity is the mission. What is your position
As I provide this proposition. Where is your volition. I pray it is not in recession.
Your souls are the question. With Hell, you can't be messing.
Take to heart this lesson. May God's love be your blessing
LA
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Author:
LA (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 14th, 2025 13:32
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments3
Rhyme pervades this poem and provides a beat that carries it to the end.
Soren, though I am not a big fan of rap. I wrote this with inspiration from a program on the roots of rap in the annals of music history. As comical as it might appear.
I'm old so rap did not appeal as a genre but there are some rap songs I love and it has deep roots in poetry that I can admire. It has some very clever and amazing rhyme schemes that all poets should take a lesson from
If you Google rap, it states that it was born in the 70's in the Bronx. It actually spans back to the 40's and 50's in blues, jazz, bluegrass and evangical music styling. So in that light, I know you couldn't possibly be that old.
In my seventies I began listening to rap in my sixties
The life of experience well lived. When did you start writing Soren? Me, I started in the 3rd grade for a tri-county poetry contest. 1977-1978 school year.
Not until my 40's
30 years plying your craft, shows in your work.
And their faith dances to the beat, enjoyed the read
Thank you Poetic.
You are very welcome
Definitely has a strong beat and a message as well. I enjoyed reading Artistic Expression. Plenty of rhyme. Sounds good read out loud.
Thank you Cassie, I appreciate your response.
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