Fourteenth

peto

As ice immobilized the cars

She walked upon the pavement's stars

My pulse beat like a bass guitar's

My future valentine 

 

My heart dissolved with every smile 

Melting onto a lovesick pile 

Deep as the desert's ancient Nile 

My dreamy valentine 

 

I swore I'd cover land and sea

Before life snatched a hold of me 

It tied me up as she walked free

My distant valentine 

 

Her ugly side does not exist 

Lost memories forge another twist 

Recalling the first time we kissed 

My absent valentine 

 

My eyes will close and there you'll be 

With beauty for the world to see

I'll ask when down on bended knee 

Are you my valentine 

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 14th, 2025 15:28
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Poetic Licence

    A very creative way of proposing, enjoyed the read

    • peto

      Thank you
      Truly appreciate your time

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        Cute and sweet a nice valentine poem

        • peto

          Appreciate your time to read and comment
          Many thanks

        • Christina8

          This is an incredible read, as I've come to expect more and more from you. Absolutely beautiful valentine poem!!!

          • peto

            Thank you Christina
            Can't explain my appreciation for your continued support and friendship



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