Notice of absence from LP2187
will be gone for a week
will be gone for a week
One minute ago
It was fine till I messed up
Now my life is screwed
How come already
I have thrown it all away
In such a short time
Why did I do this
And ruin a life I had
One minute ago
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LP2187 (
Offline) - Published: February 15th, 2025 08:51
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Comments5
Been there and done that more times than I can be comfortable with. Hope all is well for you. 🕊🙏🏻
This poem has the sense of how fragile things can be. A wonderful poetic use of wording to set the emotional stage. Very nice
Boy...this rings true and hits home. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
A sense of fear , anger, and confusion in the short but very powerful piece, hope all ok
Powerful work.
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