Star shine brightly
in the Morning,
in the Morning,
in the Morning.
Join the Sun.
Join the outside fun.
Join the game.
Join the meeting each other.
Good fun things.
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Author:
laddukavi (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My first poem about how I feel about the stars.
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Nice little fun write.
Thank you for your encouraging words.
You are very welcome
And why not? Stars being suns of their own most larger than ours why not join the sun. A fun write.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.
One thing we overlook about stars is that they are ALWAYS there, in the sky. We don’t see them during the day because the sun outshines them. When the sun is gone, then they can be seen.
It has been said : “When everywhere is dark, you can see the stars.”
There is a lesson for humanity in this.
When everyone abandons you, you will know your real friends. They will be those who will remain by your side through thick and thin.
Stars, like the moon, have always fascinated poets and lovers. The seem and are out of reach. Even if man has landed on the moon, that celestial object seems out of reach and keeps its charm.
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