Star shine brightly

laddukavi

Star shine brightly
in the Morning,
in the Morning,
in the Morning.
Join the Sun.
Join the outside fun.
Join the game.
Join the meeting each other.
Good fun things.

  • Author: laddukavi (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 15th, 2025 19:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: My first poem about how I feel about the stars.
  • Category: Children
  • Views: 18
  • Users favorite of this poem: uglykavi
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  • Poetic Licence

    Nice little fun write.

    • laddukavi

      Thank you for your encouraging words.

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        And why not? Stars being suns of their own most larger than ours why not join the sun. A fun write.

        • laddukavi

          Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.



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