My Forlorn Mind
Today, I believe some few days ago
I came to discern the reason of my sole issue.
From being passionate about my dexterity
To being unfaithful about my certainty.
When I became uneasy after defeat
I aimed frantically to attain my will.
This 'will' ranged many arenas
While bolting to fulfill certain criteria.
When will I be adept enough?
I am in search of it's response.
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Author:
Arshia (
Offline) - Published: February 17th, 2025 12:15
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
Most interestingly worded to cause doubt and uncertainty it reads well and rolls off the tongue.
Thank you! 🙏This poem is related to my fears. So, the language is a bit complex here.
A clever piece of writing, causing some confusion when first reading, enjoyed the read
Thank you! 🙏. The poem concerns overwhelming emotions and therefore the language is a bit different here.
You are very welcome
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