Two People in One.
Loving and caring in your touching tender way.
Kindness and interest in all the words you say.
Happiness in your eyes, huge smile on your face.
Our home today it is a happy pleasurable place.
It’s so nice when you care and treat me this way.
What I need to know, who am I talking to today.
Ignorance and rudeness in your own selfish way.
Anger, bitterness and rage in the things you say.
Darkness in your eyes and a grimace on your face.
At home today is not a pleasurable happy space.
It’s not nice when you treat me this horrible way.
What I need to know, who am I talking to today.
Loving and vengeful in your own conflicting way.
Complementary and critical in the things you say.
Dead and uncaring blank expression on your face.
At home with you today is a very confusing space.
It confuses me why you behave and talk this way.
I never know who I am talking to on any given day.
Nataiella
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Likened into one with multi personality challenges, a Jekyll and a Hyde. Very engaging 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated, yep she had multi personality s
You are welcome 🙏🏻🕊
Anyone who has lived with a borderline personality, a bipolar disorder, even a histrionic personality can feel this. Clever and nicely structured it sends its message powerfully. This deserves a fave
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Our home is a happy pleasurable place❤️
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Very relatable. Great work.
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Excellent write
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You're welcome
Two minds that think alike in different ways or one undecided mind .. or a portrait of the unity of opposites .. ain’t we complex things eh’ .. Neville 🧠😎👍
Thank you for your feedback, always very much apporeciated
Our home is the two of us in one mind Tobani where love rules.
Andy
Thank you for your comment, sadly not all homes are like yours, enjoy the rest of your day
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