Staying Alone

Hanible

Cold floor 

Dark closet 

I think 

Earthy odor

Blocking my nose 

Stray jacket 

I think 

I can't move 

Really 

I can't do anything 

Please explain 

Because 

I think 

I'm dead 

  • Author: Hanible (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 18th, 2025 03:09
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  • Poetic Licence

    The feeling of numbness and emptiness inside, well expressed write

  • sorenbarrett

    There is a feel of the ghostly here and the last line is haunting. Nicely written



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