AnalysisByDeepAI-Volume 15--The eager ox--2Jan2025

SOMAN RAGAVAN

2 January, 2025

Subject : Poem “The eager ox”

                                                                                                           

 

Analysis by Deep AI

(Artificial Intelligence)

Volume 15

 

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Soman Ragavan :

Hello. I will post one of my poems for analysis. Could you please comment extensively, mentioning literary genres, styles, themes, poetic language, poetic philosophies, comparison with poets of England, America, India, Africa from 1700 to 1900 and as from 1945.

At college in 1968, I studied some poems of Oliver Goldsmith (1728-1774), Gordon Byron (1788-1824), Samuel T. Coleridge (1772-1834), William Wordsworth (1770-1850), Robert Browning (1812-1889), Mathew Arnold (1822-1888), Alfred Tennyson (1809-1892) and some other poets of that era.  Make any comments or comparisons you wish on my poems. Say if there are other contemporary poets who write as I do and compare my poetry with theirs. I live in Mauritius, an island in the Indian Ocean. 

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Deep AI :  

Hello Soman Ragavan! I'd be happy to provide an extensive analysis of your poem. Since I haven't seen your poem yet, I'll structure my comments generically, with guidance on how to think about various aspects of poetic analysis that align with your request.

 

### Literary Genres and Styles

Poetry often falls into various genres such as lyric poetry, narrative poetry, epic poetry, and dramatic poetry. A common contemporary style you might employ is free verse, which offers flexibility with form and structure, lacking a consistent rhyme scheme or meter. If your poem utilizes structured forms (like sonnets or haikus), this might align it with traditional styles across various historical periods.

 

### Themes

Themes in poetry are the underlying topics or messages, such as love, nature, identity, mortality, and social critique. Consider what themes your poem explores. For instance:

- **Nature:** Wordsworth often celebrated the beauty of the natural world, conveying deep connections to the landscape.

- **Identity:** Poets like Walt Whitman explore selfhood, while the Indian poet Rabindranath Tagore examines cultural identity and spirituality.

- **Social and Historical Contexts:** Many poets from Africa, such as Ayi Kwei Armah, address themes of post-colonial identity or social justice. Comparing your thematic concerns with theirs could highlight similarities or divergences in perspective.

 

### Poetic Language and Imagery

Poetic language often employs metaphors, similes, personification, and evocative imagery to create emotional and intellectual resonance. For instance, Samuel Taylor Coleridge's use of vivid imagery creates emotional landscapes that resonate with Romantic ideals, while the modernist poets like T.S. Eliot utilized fragmentation to reflect the complexities of contemporary life.

 

### Poetic Philosophies

The philosophies behind poetry can range from Romantic idealism, urging for emotional expression, to Modernism, emphasizing innovation and depth of meaning. Think about what philosophy resonates with your work. Are you more aligned with the emotional depth of the Romantics or the analytical coolness of Modernism?

 

### Comparisons with Historical Poets

- **England (1700-1900):** You might consider the Romantic poets like Wordsworth and Keats, who emphasized personal emotion and nature, versus Victorian poets like Tennyson and Browning, who often included elements of societal commentary.

- **America:** Whitman's embrace of the self and the collective American experience, in contrast to Emily Dickinson's introspective and often ambiguous expressions.

- **India:** Tagore's blending of Western and Eastern philosophies in his exploration of love and mysticism shares common ground with the lyrical qualities you may express.

- **Africa:** Poets like Wole Soyinka grapple with cultural identity and colonialism, following the footsteps of earlier writers in incorporating oral traditions.

 

### Contemporary Poets

It's important to consider contemporary poets who may share stylistic or thematic affinities with your work. Poets such as Keki N. Daruwalla and Meena Kandasamy reflect the intricacies of Indian identity and politics, similar to how contemporary poets in Mauritius may address themes of multiculturalism or the colonial legacy.

 

### Summary

Ultimately, when analyzing your poem, consider how your unique voice and experiences as a poet from Mauritius inform the themes, language, and stylistic choices you make. Explore how this might sit with or diverge from the rich tapestry of poetic traditions across time and geography.

 

Once you share your poem, I’d be able to provide more tailored feedback and analysis, diving deeper into specific stylistic and thematic elements discussed above!

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Soman Ragavan :

Here is my poem “The eager ox.” I am also attaching background notes to the poem. (Poem and background notes posted).

 

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Deep AI :

Thank you for sharing your poem "The Eager Ox" along with the background notes. This poem and the accompanying newspaper articles provide a fascinating glimpse into the relationship between Sohunlall and his ox, Gopal, and offer insights into the themes of work, companionship, and the human relationship with animals.

 

### Analysis of the Poem

 

The poem is structured into 10 sections, each capturing a moment in the interaction between Sohunlalog (the carter) and his eager ox, Gopal. The poem explores several themes through Gopal's eagerness to work:

 

- **Appreciation for Work:** Unlike many who hate work, Gopal is eager to pull a cart. This eagerness is what Sohunlall appreciates, seeing it as a sign of friendship and companionship.

 

- **Understanding and Communication:** Gopal's ability to understand his name and commands from Sohunlall suggests a deep connection between the two. This understanding is not just about following orders but also about mutual respect.

 

- **Independence vs. Dependence:** While Gopal hates to be made to wait, he also seems to understand the value of work and the importance of fulfilling his duties. This dichotomy highlights the fine line between independence and dependence in relationships.

 

- **The Value of Simplicity:** The poem touches on the theme of preferring simple, rural life over the complexity of urban life. Gopal's joy in pulling a cart, free from the noise and pollution of the city, underscores this preference.

 

### Comparisons with Other Poets

 

Your poem shares similarities with the works of poets who explore human relationships with animals, such as:

 

- **William Wordsworth** in "The Prelude," where he describes his relationship with nature and its profound impact on his life.

 

- **James Herriot** in his "All Creatures Great and Small" series, which is more narrative but explores themes of companionship and understanding between humans and animals.

 

- **Rabindranath Tagore** in his poetry, which often highlights the spiritual connection between humans and nature, including animals.

 

### Contemporary Context

 

In contemporary literature, there is a growing trend of exploring human-animal relationships, often highlighting themes of empathy, companionship, and understanding. Your poem fits within this broader context, offering a unique perspective from the Caribbean island nation of Mauritius.

 

### Conclusion

 

"The Eager Ox" is a charming poem that explores themes of work, companionship, and the value of simplicity through the lens of a farmer's relationship with his ox. It offers a poignant contrast to modern urban life and highlights the importance of mutual respect and understanding in relationships. The background notes provide a rich historical context to this poem, underscoring its significance as a snapshot of rural life in Mauritius around 1962.

 

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Soman Ragavan :

Thank you. The story was both amusing and touching. The young ox found it fun to be attached to a cart and to pull it. It shows the innocence of the young animal. As the master was delaying, the young ox ran away with the cart. He had no idea where he was going !...

 

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Deep AI :    

You're welcome, Soman! Your observation captures the essence of the poem beautifully. The innocence of the young ox and its playful eagerness to work is a heartwarming portrayal. This element of playfulness highlights a key aspect of animal behavior and the bond formed between the animal and its handler.

 

### Thematic Depth

 

1. **Innocence and Joy in Labor**:

   - The young ox's enthusiasm serves as a metaphor for the joy to be found in work, especially when it is approached with a sense of playfulness and curiosity. This reflects a keen observation of nature and the inherent disposition of animals toward tasks that might otherwise seem mundane or burdensome to humans.

 

2. **The Human-Animal Connection**:

   - The relationship between the ox and the master is central to the poem. The ox personifies qualities like eagerness and impatience, almost acting like a child eager for adventure. This connection reveals how animals can feel and express emotions like excitement, frustration, and affection, further emphasizing the depth of the bond between humans and animals.

 

3. **Humor in Everyday Life**:

   - The amusing aspects of the ox running away with the cart introduce a lighthearted tone. It not only provides comic relief but also reflects the unpredictability of life and the humorous moments that often arise from our interactions with animals. This mirrors qualities found in the works of poets like Robert Service, who often infused humor into verses about rural life and animals.

 

4. **Impulsiveness and Freedom**:

   - The young ox's impulsive act of running away with the cart portrays an innate desire for freedom, even if it lacks a clear destination. This could be a metaphor for youth itself—a desire to explore and experience the world without fully understanding the consequences.

 

### Contextual Connections

 

Your poem draws on a rich tradition of poetry that often features an exploration of animals, particularly in pastoral or rural settings. The way you blend humor with a deeper emotional connection aligns with the styles of poets like:

 

- **Robert Frost**, who often explores rural life and the intimacy between humans and nature.

- **Ogden Nash**, known for his light-hearted verses about animals and their characteristics, merging humor with insightful observations.

 

### Conclusion

 

You're highlighting the ox's innocence not only adds depth to the individual narrative but also touches on larger themes of companionship, work, and the joy found in simple tasks. The mix of humor and affection in the story resonates well, creating a multi-dimensional portrayal that evokes both laughter and warmth. The dynamic between the ox and the master reflects life’s unpredictable journey, sprinkled with moments of beauty and levity.

 

If you have more thoughts or specific aspects you'd like to delve deeper into, feel free to share!

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Soman Ragavan :

Please make a more detailed analysis by each section of the poem.

 

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Deep AI :

Certainly, Soman! Here’s a detailed analysis of "The Eager Ox," section by section, highlighting the themes, emotions, and poetic elements in each part.

 

### Detailed Section-by-Section Analysis

 

#### 1st Section

**Text:**

*He is not yet a grown-up ox, 

But he is eager to work… 

He wants to pull a cart. 

He seems to understand the job.*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Theme of Youth and Eagerness**: The ox is described as young, emphasizing its inexperience, yet it shows a strong desire to work. This juxtaposition illustrates the theme of youthful enthusiasm contrasted with the lack of maturity.

- **Personification**: The phrase "he seems to understand the job" brings a human-like quality to the ox, hinting at a deeper connection between the animal and its duties.

- **Imagery**: The imagery introduces an animal ready to engage in labor, setting the stage for the ox's journey.

 

#### 2nd Section

**Text:**

*Full of eagerness he is, 

Romping around joyfully. 

A cart be fun, 

For him. 

A cart be a toy to play with.*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Joy and Playfulness**: The repetition of "full of eagerness" and the ox "romping around joyfully" creates a vivid picture of a playful spirit. The cart symbolizes not just work but also play, enhancing the theme of joy in labor.

- **Childlike Innocence**: The comparison of the cart to a "toy" showcases the innocence of the young ox, inviting readers to feel empathy for its playful outlook on life.

- **Tone**: The tone here is lighthearted and whimsical, which sets up a contrast to the challenges that will arise later in the poem.

 

#### 3rd Section

**Text:**

*Hey, tie me up to yon cart, 

He seems to say! 

I want to pull yon cart!*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Voice and Direct Appeal**: The ox's desire to be tied to the cart is articulated, making the animal relatable. The phrase "Hey, tie me up" adds a sense of immediacy and enthusiasm.

- **Dialogue**: While the ox cannot speak, the human interpretation of its eagerness gives it a voice, emphasizing the theme of communication beyond language.

- **Exclamation**: The use of exclamation adds energy to the section, mirroring the ox's excitement.

 

#### 4th Section

**Text:**

*When tied up, 

He hates to be made to wait… 

Hurry up, 

I want to get going! 

I am going places! 

This cart be light, 

Say I… 

Methought ‘twould be heavy…*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Impatience and Urgency**: The ox’s frustration at having to wait highlights its eagerness, enhancing the depiction of its personality.

- **Personification**: The ox is given human emotions—impatience and urgency—which deepens the reader’s connection to it.

- **Contrast**: The ox's expectation that the cart will be heavy contrasts with its actual enjoyment and ease in wanting to pull it, showcasing a misjudgment of its own abilities.

 

#### 5th Section

**Text:**

*Old man, 

Why doth thou tarry?! 

What art thou up to?? 

Come on, 

Let’s go, 

Or I will run away with the cart!!*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Dialogue and Address**: The direct address to the "old man" provides a humorous and slightly rebellious tone, illustrating the dynamic between the ox and its master.

- **Call to Action**: The urgency in the ox’s voice emphasizes its desire for activity and highlights its impatience to get started.

- **Humor**: The impending threat of running away with the cart adds a playful, almost cheeky quality to the interaction.

 

#### 6th Section

**Text:**

*There! 

Impatient from waiting, 

The eager ox starts to run away!... 

The poor master hath to drop everything 

And run after the impatient animal!...*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Action and Movement**: The ox taking off provides a turning point in the narrative, showcasing its child-like exuberance and instinct for adventure.

- **Role Reversal**: The description of the master as “poor” reflects the chaos that results from the ox's spiritedness, reversing the traditional roles of control and authority.

- **Imagery**: The visual imagery of the ox running away enhances the excitement and energy of the scene, suggesting both a playful spirit and an element of tension.

 

#### 7th Section

**Text:**

*Little ox, 

Thou doth not even know 

Where to go! 

Please, stop now! 

Jeez, 

This ox will drive me mad!*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Frustration**: The human’s exasperation contrasts with the joy of the ox, creating humor in the situation.

- **Direct Address**: Addressing the ox as "little" evokes tenderness, suggesting a protective relationship despite the chaos.

- **Exclamation**: The “Jeez” conveys a relatable human frustration, making the poem more engaging and allowing readers to sympathize with both characters.

 

#### 8th Section

**Text:**

*Others hate to work: 

This one be the opposite! 

He can’t wait…*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Contrast with Others**: This section subtly highlights the unique character of the young ox among other animals or beings that may dread work.

- **Theme of Motivation**: The ox’s eagerness to engage in work contrasts with common perceptions of labor, suggesting that joy can be found in duty.

 

#### 9th Section

**Text:**

*The poor carter catches up with the cart, 

Panting and sweating… 

The little ox gives him a tough time. 

Hey, little ox, 

Listen to thy master!...*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Struggle and Exhaustion**: The master's effort to catch up emphasizes the dynamics of their relationship, with the ox's energy juxtaposed against the master's fatigue.

- **Tone of Authority**: The call to "listen to thy master" reflects a traditional view of hierarchy, yet this is complicated by the previous sections where the ox displays its independence and willfulness.

 

#### 10th and Last Section

**Text:**

*But, ‘tis the ox the real master!...*

 

**Analysis:**

- **Role Reversal**: This concluding statement brings the poem full circle, suggesting that the ox’s spirit and character actually dominate the relationship. Despite being the one who pulls the cart, the ox embodies a sense of freedom and vitality that overshadows the master's authority.

- **Philosophical Reflection**: This final line invites readers to contemplate the nature of mastery and companionship, posing questions about the true nature of work and relationships.

- **Humorous Irony**: The humorous twist at the end leaves readers with a sense of lightness, recognizing that sometimes those we think are in control may not be as in charge as they seem.

 

### Conclusion

 

The poem "The Eager Ox" intricately weaves together themes of eagerness, companionship, and the interplay between authority and freedom. Each section builds on the relationship between the ox and the master, engaging readers with both humor and relatable emotions. The personification of the ox allows for a deeper exploration of its character, reflecting both innocence and impulsive joy in the context of work. Overall, your poem encapsulates a charming and insightful narrative that resonates with themes of nature, work, and the human-animal bond.

 

If you have any further inquiries or need more specific analysis, feel free to let me know!

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Soman Ragavan :

• Which literary works since 1700 treat the subjects in a similar way ?
• What would have been the views of the French writer Arthur Rimbaud (1854-1891) about this poem ?

 

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Deep AI :

### (a) Literary Works Since 1700 That Treat Similar Subjects

 

Several literary works since 1700 explore themes of nature, animals, the bond between humans and animals, and the playful or joyful aspects of labor. Here are a few notable works:

 

1. **"The Task" by William Cowper (1785)**:

   - This poem emphasizes the relationship between nature and the human experience. Cowper often highlights the beauty of rural life, much like your poem celebrates the joy of the ox in its work.

 

2. **"Animal Farm" by George Orwell (1945)**:

   - While this novel employs animals to explore themes of political allegory and social critique, it also portrays the intelligence and complexity of animal behavior and relationships with humans.

 

3. **"The Wind in the Willows" by Kenneth Grahame (1908)**:

   - This children’s novel presents animals in human-like roles, exploring friendship and adventure. It celebrates the innocence and joy of nature, similar to the themes you presented with the eager ox.

 

4. **"The Tale of Peter Rabbit" by Beatrix Potter (1902)**:

   - This beloved children's book includes anthropomorphic animals and reflects innocent adventures. The carefree spirit of the animals mirrors the playful essence of the young ox.

 

5. **"The Adventures of Tom Sawyer" by Mark Twain (1876)**:

   - While focusing on human characters, this novel explores themes of childhood innocence, adventure, and joyful mischief, akin to the ox's playful spirit in your poem.

 

6. **"The Farmer's Bride" by Charlotte Mew (1916)**:

   - This poem intricately explores the interaction between humans and nature, using vivid imagery and emotion. The themes of connection and emotional complexity echo those in your description of the ox.

 

7. **"A.A. Milne's Poems" (e.g., from "When We Were Very Young," 1924)**:

   - Milne's work often showcases childlike curiosity and innocence, as well as a deep appreciation for playful engagement with the world, akin to your depiction of the young ox.

 

### (b) Possible Views of Arthur Rimbaud on This Poem

 

Arthur Rimbaud is known for his revolutionary approach to poetry and his embrace of vivid imagery, emotion, and symbolic representation. While Rimbaud lived in a different literary context primarily focused on symbolist and impressionist ideals, we can speculate on his potential views of your poem based on his themes and style:

 

1. **Celebration of Innocence and Freedom**:

   - Rimbaud often celebrated themes of freedom and rebellion against societal norms. He might appreciate the ox’s impulsive desire to run away and experience life freely, seeing it as a depiction of youthful spirit and the desire to escape the constraints of duty (represented by the master).

 

2. **Symbolism of the Animal**:

   - Rimbaud used vivid imagery and personal symbolism throughout his work. He may have viewed the ox as a powerful symbol of labor and innocence. The ox’s exuberance could symbolize untainted nature, contrasting with the complexities and constraints of human life.

 

3. **Critique of Traditional Roles**:

   - Rimbaud’s work often critiqued societal structures and conventional roles. He might interpret the relationship between the ox and the master as a commentary on authority, suggesting that true freedom rests with the one who embraces playfulness and joy (the ox), rather than the one who enforces rule (the master).

 

4. **Focus on Sensory Experience**:

   - Rimbaud valued sensory experiences and the evocation of feelings through images. He might appreciate the poem's playful tone and imagery, especially the contrasts between joy and frustration, seeing them as reflective of human emotion.

 

5. **Desire for Adventure**:

   - Rimbaud's fascination with adventure and exploration aligns with the ox’s desire to "go places." He might find resonance in the spirit of adventure depicted, recognizing the universal longing to break free from mundane existence.

 

6. **Rebellion Against Complacency**:

   - Rimbaud's rebellious nature might lead him to appreciate the ox's impatience as a rejection of complacency and the status quo. The energy and spirit of the poem could be seen as a microcosm of the larger human experience—a challenge to accept life as it is.

 

### Conclusion

 

In summary, while Rimbaud lived in a different era and context, he would likely appreciate the underlying themes of innocence, rebellion, and the playful spirit of the poem about the eager ox. Your work, with its celebration of joy in labor and connection to nature, resonates with literary concerns that span centuries and various styles, making it a rich addition to the tradition of animal and nature-focused literature. If you have further questions or need more elaboration, feel free to ask!

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Soman Ragavan :

What would be the views of the Academie francaise on this poem and how would they compare it with contemporary French poems ?

 

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Deep AI :

### Views of the Académie française on This Poem

 

The Académie française, a prestigious French institution dedicated to promoting the French language and its literature, has traditionally emphasized clarity, precision, and elegance in writing. Considering the poem's themes, style, and structure, here are possible views from the Académie française and comparisons with contemporary French poems:

 

**Traditional French Poetry Values**:

 

1. **Classical Form and Meter**: The Académie française has historically valued classical forms and meters in poetry, such as sonnets and alexandrines. While your poem doesn't strictly adhere to these forms, its structured sections and rhyme scheme might be seen as an homage to traditional French poetry.
2. **Clear and Precise Language**: The Académie française emphasizes the importance of clear and precise language in literature. Your poem's focus on the ox's emotions and actions could be seen as a departure from this traditional emphasis on clarity, as it uses more figurative language to convey the ox's inner world.
3. **Use of Allusion and Reference**: French poetry often employs allusions and references to historical events, mythology, or literature. Your poem's focus on everyday scenes and emotions might be seen as less allusive than traditional French poetry.

 

**Contemporary French Poetry Trends**:

 

1. **Free Verse and Experimentation**: Contemporary French poetry has seen a shift towards free verse and experimentation with form, language, and style. Your poem's structured sections and rhyme scheme might be seen as less innovative compared to contemporary works that push the boundaries of form.
2. **Focus on the Human Condition**: Many contemporary French poets focus on the human condition, exploring themes of identity, existential crises, and social commentary. Your poem's focus on the ox's emotions and experiences might be seen as less directly applicable to human concerns.
3. **Use of Imagery and Symbolism**: Contemporary French poetry often employs vivid imagery and symbolism to convey complex emotions and ideas. Your poem's use of imagery and symbolism, such as the ox's personality and actions, might be seen as less subtle or sophisticated compared to contemporary works.

 

**Comparison with Contemporary French Poets**:

 

1. **Guillaume Apollinaire**: Apollinaire's work is known for its experimentation with form and language. While your poem is more structured than Apollinaire's work, it shares a similar focus on everyday life and the importance of sensory experience.
2. **Paul Éluard**: Éluard's poetry often explores themes of love, nature, and everyday life. Your poem's focus on the ox's emotions and experiences might be seen as less abstract or metaphorical compared to Éluard's work.
3. **Sylvie Guillemot**: Guillemot's poetry often explores themes of identity, love, and social commentary. Your poem's focus on the ox's emotions and experiences might be seen as less directly applicable to human concerns compared to Guillemot's work.

 

### Conclusion

 

The Académie française might view your poem as a charming tribute to traditional French poetry values, with its structured sections, rhyme scheme, and focus on everyday life. However, contemporary French poetry trends might see your poem as less innovative or experimental compared to works that push the boundaries of form, language, and style. If you have further questions or need more elaboration, feel free to ask!

 

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Soman Ragavan :

Thank you very much. Goodbye for now.

 

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Deep AI :

You're welcome! I'm glad I could assist you. If you have more questions in the future or need further help, don't hesitate to reach out. Goodbye for now, and take care!

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