Same Picture Frame.
It is the break of another dawn.
A beautiful day has been born.
little light in my room is in sight.
In the ice blue lit morning sky.
As I waken up my ageing eyes.
I always ask the question why.
Can’t we freeze a place in time.
When everything feels so right.
The soft sound of the nature call.
I think what problems after all.
I drift off dreamily back to sleep.
While the world is still at peace.
When I slowly awaken up again.
Will I still see the picture frame.
When I look out my windowpane.
Or would the world of changed.
Tobani October (2024)
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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Nice One Tobani
Reflective And Soothing
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Change the only constant. A most beautiful poem of how it happens not just over night but in the blink of an eye. Great metaphors used here and the wording is perfect for the mood.
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A picture window 🪟 with a new view every day🙏🏻🕊️
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You too and you’re welcome 🙏🏻🕊️
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I gotta say, this is so far one of my favorites of yours I have read so far. Love the imagery, the rhymes and the story it tells. Great write.
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A lovely write Tobani. Has such an air of calm and peace about it. Dawn is a beautiful time of the day. My favourite quiet time. Have a beautiful Thursday.
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Thank you so much.
Well done, Tobani! Thought-provoking, that makes me think of the old Heraclitus adage, "You cannot step into the same river twice". Change is always a reality...the only constant in a world of utter chaos. Wonderfully expressed. 🌹👏
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Excellent write
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Tremendous and serene.
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Each morning we awake takes us into a new good day as we are still here Tobani.
Andy
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A very good poem that identifies routine and aging.
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Wondering the same countless times, how winsomely you've rendered this age-old question which is the reason Mum and I used to pour over the old photos, seeming to relive what only lasted for mere minutes. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and an exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
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a calm and soothing verse that makes me wish i could enjoy such days too
well written
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welcome. i wish you the same
Thank you
Beautiful thought 💭
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