I can’t breathe

David Wakeling

Minneapolis is in darkness,
The Devil fires are burning.
I see you Momma in the distant light.
I will try to come to you.

I can’t breathe,
I can’t breathe,
Oh God Almighty.
I can’t breathe.

  • Author: David Wakeling (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 21st, 2025 01:38
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • arqios

    So much explosive emotion in this read. Also very heart rending 🙏🏻🕊️

  • Poetic Licence

    I can feel the panic as i read, great write

  • Cassie58

    How terrifying a situation is this. Fear and panic setting in. The scenario plays out in vivid imagery. Well done David.

  • Tony36

    Excellent write David

  • Mutley Ravishes

    I'm supposedly
    A cop
    I and my "colleagues"
    Let me
    Be filmed openly
    Committing an atrocity
    Knowing full well
    On social media
    It would be posted
    And my police buddies and innocent citizens
    Would be toasted
    In riots
    Go figure

    David Dorn R.I.P

    • David Wakeling

      American cops watch too much television so they have no accountability.Thanks for commenting

      • Mutley Ravishes

        What if it's so much more than that? (as I was hinting at beforehand.) Thanks for your reply.



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