I have lost what makes me whole,
The pain throws me in a downward slope,
Do not fret for i will rise like a phoenix who's lost his life,
I can see what's beyond the sky,
I can see what lies inside,
It's a burning light that catches eyes,
I will grow beyond the sky's,
I have just started this life of mine,
I will not start my demise,
I will grow past this pain inside,
To see the light shining bright,
Until the day my eyes shut tight,
So, watch me fly ever so high.
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Author:
Tanner (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem because this is how I feel in this moment. I hope this give someone else the point of view of even when things look bad you can always find a way to grow and overcome anything.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments4
Taking bad experiences and gaining inspiration from them learning from the past and moving on with the future is what life is about. A great write very inspirational
thank you i was told it wasnt vary good so im glad there are people out there that will appreciate the concept.
Learning from the bad to make more of the good, very positive and enjoyable read
thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it and like the message behind it, that means a lot.
You are very welcome, have a lovely weekend
Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you i cant wait to post more
Looking forward to that! 🙏🏻🕊️
Great message and so this gets a fave from me. Well done and welcome to MPS. Looking forward to more! 🌹👏
thank you though most of my poems are written on how I feel so there will be a verity of kinds. I'm looking for word to posting more
You are most welcome. I would hope that to be true. Variety is the spice of life.
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