Notice of absence from Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏
depression has me now… I’m done writing here
depression has me now… I’m done writing here
unfortunately
pain does too, so what to do?
breathe…love and forgive
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Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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A most interesting approach and thought provoking poem. Nicely done
Thank you as always Soren, teach me how to get as popular as you!
Simply show each other poet that you wish them success and encourage them for what they do well. If your really mean it people will know.
I do mean it… thank you
A stark reminder, life is too short to live angry. Great work.
Ain’t it fun… living in the real world!
I liked the fact that you didn't talk about the anger itself but continued, as if in a conversation.
Thank you onion! All my poems are like as if I’m sitting talking down with a person… sometimes that person is myself too. Thank you for your input.
You’re welcome. And your style is very unique to me, very refreshing☺️.
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