Smile
Lips curve, eyes alight,
Warmth spreads outward, like the sun,
Joy blooms in your heart.
LA
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Author:
LA (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 23rd, 2025 05:45
- Category: Haiku
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Smile
Lips curve, eyes alight,
Warmth spreads outward, like the sun,
Joy blooms in your heart.
LA
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Comments3
Such artistic flare here, to use nature to describe a smile. Using the sun and flowers is such a masterful touch. So nicely done, loved it.
Inspired by my grandson, thank you Soren.
There is no other inspiration like that of a child and the more so when a grand child. They are a God sent reward for all one suffers with one's own children.
Only perfection from those close to you could birth this, and it is wonderful 🕊🙏🏻
High praise, thank you arqios.
You’re welcome LA🙏🏻🕊️
Smile at the world and the world will smile at you, enjoyed the read
Yes, better than the alternate. Thank you for reading Poetic.
You are very welcome
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