An empty, abandoned room,
Just a body on the floor.
Only thorns left where the roses used to bloom,
severely blood-stained walls.
Nobody dared to enter the room the corpse was in;
"It's Bird In Red," they whispered in fear.
The victim had hearts carved into her skin.
I'll come back, my dears.
Red ink dripped onto the table.
I dipped my pen in your blood.
Five words I wrote on the paper:
"Love kills. I am love."
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Bird In Red (Pseudonym) (
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Comments3
And sometimes it does feel like that,but we eventually rise from the dead, enjoyed the read
Glad you enjoyed! Thank you!
You are very welcome
Brutal and sad with a clever use of language to make its point. Nicely written
Thank you!
"Clever use of language" is a very nice compliment to get as English is not my native language.
Very powerful and well written. Love is a drug. Some drugs are good drugs. Some drugs are bad ones. Which one is love?
Thank you!
That is a very good question. Love seems to be both: good and bad, life and death, pain and comfort.
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