"The doll's eyes gleam bright, with an otherworldly light
A heart of darkness beats, within its porcelain sight
Its stitched smile veils a sorrow, deep within
Ominous whispers fill the air that only darkness can hold
"In moonlit silence, the doll's eyes gleam
A malevolent presence, in a porcelain dream
Its threaded smile hides a secret, a heart of pain
A whispered promise of terror, that echoes through the brain
"With every glance, the doll's power takes hold
A whispered suggestion, that the mind cannot begin to unfold
It weaves a web of madness, with knots of fear and dread
A puppeteer of terror, with the owner's soul as its curse
"In twisted dreams, the owner's mind does stray
Where shadows dance, and darkness holds its sway
The doll's presence lurks, a constant, eerie companion
Through winding corridors, where sanity cannot reside
"In darkened dreams, the doll's face does twist
Eyes aglow, like embers from a witch's kiss
Its smile stretches wide, a grotesque, inhuman grin
As the owner's desperate screams, are muffled by the doll's shadowy core
"The doll's dark presence lingers, a haunting, ghostly sigh
Echoes of madness whisper, as the owner's soul says goodbye
The doll's cold, dead eyes watch, as the darkness closes in
And the owner's screams are silenced, forever trapped within."
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Lil_Bit0912 (
Offline) - Published: February 24th, 2025 15:02
- Comment from author about the poem: i just wanted to write a different poem and voodoo dolls and dolls creep me out but then again they dont creep me out at the same time, i love creepy stuff and stuff that scares me, its a thrill. i love writting different kinds of poetry and i just write whatever comes to mind
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Good rhyme in this poem. It flows well and many people are creeped out by dolls. Not sure why. A fun read
i dont know why some people are sometimes that scared of dolls, but i love it lol and thank you for your kind words 🙂
That's means allot to me! Thank you!
I am creeped out by doll's and i hope i don't come across this one, an well written enjoyable write
what creeps you out about them? lol
A neighbour from years ago collected old porcelain ones, all had freeky eyes, a lot looked quite sinister more like the devils child than a girls toy
I use to have those two! Lol
Loved this. Right up my alley! Welcome to MPS, btw! Glad you're here and look forward to more of your work. 🌹👏
Thanks Tristan ☺️ It sucks I can only upload one po we m a day 🙁
Yeah. I thought it did, too; however, trust me when I say this, it gives your poem time to see the light of day before posting another. I am on other sites where you aren't limited, but my poems get far less views and exposure because people are flooding the feed with a billion posts. Hopefully, you'll find that the once a day thing actually works in your favor. But, with that said, I feel you on being eager to share and being disappointed on having to wait. That said, you are most welcome, my friend. Glad you are on here.
This is cool! The idea of Voodoo dolls is pretty insane, I like this topic for a poem!
why thank you so much for your very kind words 🙂
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