Notice of absence from broke
wont be on anymore I'm going on an adventure
wont be on anymore I'm going on an adventure
feals like I'm falling
every second of the hour
the wind hitting my face
but why do I have no fear
as I plumit to my death
the memories come back
familly ones everything
you start to realize how good you had it
you don't wanna die
you start to take back everything you have done wrong
from J walking to stealing
you think to your self why me out of all people
before you hit the ground you shead one last tear
" I'm awake"
take this as a sign to do better
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john mead (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: be kind the kindness you put out in the world will always come back to you late or early one mistake wont effect your life but many of them will so as you live you life remember this not everyone has it as good as you
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A sign is a useful thing like in times like this. It also brings hope and a sort of accountability first to self and then to others as well. 🙏🏻🕊
thanks
welcome
A poignant read full of metaphor from the fall to the end. A great message sent as a gift to those that will listen. Being kind is a blessing to the giver.
thank you
The message of you get out of life what you put in comes through nicely in this write, enjoyed the read
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You are very welcome
love it big bro
thanks lil sis
So true, the second you do it you regret it... This fall is an awakening!
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I have 100% had that dream.
yeah
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