Whittling the point
paring it down
cutting the volume
honing the sound
Sharpening each line
words drop and fall
meaning to thunder
— lightning recalled
(Dreamsleep: February, 2025)
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Author:
Kurt Philip Behm (
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- Published: February 25th, 2025 09:56
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 9
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
Comments3
Excellent write Kurt
Thanks Tony.
You're welcome
I'm sure that you used this process in writing this poem. Very nice
Amen, thanks Soren.
Wow. Love this. Easy fave!
Many thanks !
You're welcome.
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