with thoughts flowing from the mind
clowed by the judgment of the heart
the muscle that cant be broken but only crushed
stretched and bent never broken
Most interesting a statement that goes in the face of language and the trite broken heart. This definitely leads the reader to ponder. Very nice
What is clowed? I am assuming you meant closed… editing is still important in poetry!
Sounds like heart ruling the head and it's broken, nicely expressed
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Most interesting a statement that goes in the face of language and the trite broken heart. This definitely leads the reader to ponder. Very nice
What is clowed? I am assuming you meant closed… editing is still important in poetry!
Sounds like heart ruling the head and it's broken, nicely expressed
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