the feeling noone feels

xqw


Notice of absence from xqw
Silence is peaceful sometimes:)

It lingers where the silence was

A breath too light, to quick

 

not abscence, not prescence

 but the thing between - 

a whisper lost in noones ear 

 

not sorrow

not joy

not longing

not peace

 

but the hush before the echo forms

the silence of dark before the storm

a shadow cast that noone sees

the pause between heartbeats

the gap between thought and speech

 

it is there for sure

like the footprints on the shore

washed away by the tide

 

Tracing the horizon 

as the sun melts below

not day

not night

 

but the emptiness between

  • Author: xqw (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 26th, 2025 15:47
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A lovely use of space, nothingness to create an atmosphere and that hush gives feeling to this poem. A lovely write expressed in such great images. Lovely!

  • Poetic Licence

    A well crafted write with lovely imagery, enjoyed the read



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