one step closer

broke


Notice of absence from broke
if I'm not on I'm looking for an adventure

ive gotten better

im doing better

people like me

and I'm doing good in school 

and I'm improving on my goal

I have friends

and a whole 

now I'm one step closer

to my dream

cause I'ma be 

the best

player the best one

you know

ive gotten better

so thanks for all the support loves yah

  • Author: john mead (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 27th, 2025 08:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: I'm doing really good in basketball right now so thank you guys
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 15
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  • sorenbarrett

    Always feels so good when one notices improvement in one's skills. A lovely write

    • broke

      thanks

      • broke

      • Poetic Licence

        Just keep your head down and keep being positive, and you will get even better, nice to read a positive write, enjoyed

        • broke

          thanks

          • broke

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • sheta

              good job john

              • broke

                thanks

                • broke

                  thanks sis

                  • sheta

                    yea

                    • broke

                      yea



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