Still blurry
From seeing
The blood
The pain
A crazy mind
A heart stop beating
Gun
Murder
Death
Killed
They are red
No dilation
But
Has seen some elimination
Closing the lids
Doesn't help
Dreams finished
Them off
Their grave
Has been set
They had seen enough
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A powerful write of enough being enough. Well written
Thank you so much I appreciate your comments
A sense of end of the line, no more, a powerful and poignant write
Powerful write
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