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Hello, I'm currently residing in a rural area with limited internet access. I rely on my prepaid data plan to stay connected, and I'm running low on data. As a result, I'll be temporarily unavailable until I can replenish my data or access a stable WiFi connection. Thank you for your understanding!
I think of you day and night
You shine so bright, a beautiful light
In my life, you've shown me the way
But no matter how I care, you don't stay
I've shown you love, but you don't see
My heart beats for you, but you're not me
Come live in my mind, it's a peaceful place
I'll keep you smiling, with a warm and loving space
But it's hard to love you, when you're like a stone
No heart, no mind, no eyes to call your own
You don't feel my love, you don't hear my voice
It's exhausting to love you, with no joyful choice.
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Author:
Ndou Rolivhuwa (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 2nd, 2025 14:36
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is a reflection of my unrelenting emotions, a sincere expression of love that remains unspoken. Dedicated to the one who unknowingly holds my heart.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
It is most difficult living with a fantasy that is never confirmed and all that is needed is to reach out and ask. The worst is rejection and the best fulfillment. This poem speaks of all the emotion of passion and blooming love that is unrequited. Good rhyme helps the mood and the meter is good as well. Nicely done
Thank you for your insightful and thoughtful words! You've perfectly captured the essence of the poem, and I'm grateful for your understanding. You're right, the uncertainty of unrequited love can be daunting, but taking that risk can lead to either heartbreak or profound connection. I appreciate your kind words about the rhyme, meter, and mood – it means a lot to me!
Filled with love and emotion for someone, maybe it's time to tell them, nicely expressed
Thank you so much for your kinds words! I'm glad you felt the emotions behind the poem, you're right, sometimes it's hard to express our feelings
You are very welcome
Very nice ))
Thank you so much
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